Hi all. Would you care to review my landing page?

I just made an overall changes over the old one and below is the new landing page.

Malaysia Contest Portal

Your advice and suggestion is highly appreciated. I just wondering, how much this page take to load on your browser...?

Cheers!
Sha

 

it loads instantly( i have 2mb/s connection)
the items in the left part of the header are unordered and distoreted

 

Thanks slayer. Left part to be precisely is it referring to top left area? May i know what type of browser that you are using?

Sorry for all the troubles. Really appreciate all your help.

 

where is your site hosted? it loads pretty fast.

 

i'm using firefox 2 and resolution:1152x864

check the attached image

 

ichigo - my site is hosted with http://datakl.com/ . Not sure where they server are located but their support is locally stationed in my country.

slayer - thanks! thanks! thanks! you even go extra mile to capture the screenshot. Really appreciate that and rep added! I've make some changes. can you try and refresh again? Any changes?

 

Anyone else care to review? I'll review yours if you review mine..

 

There are a few places where your English translation isn't quite right - actually I feel quite bad pointing that out because on the whole it is very very good (and a damn site better than my Malaysian!)

But, the one thing that did stand out translation wise is where you have plural of the word contest - it should be "contests".

So, whilst...
"Instant access to contest archive"
...is correct, the following...
"More than 20 new contest added everyday"
...is incorrect and should read...
"More than 20 new contests added everyday"

There are quite a few examples of that on your page.

And one other thing, I believe that putting the words "Other Links" as a label for what are actually Google adverts is against Google's TOS and could get you banned. You are not meant to say anything that suggests they are anything other than PPC adverts, and you're best not saying anything at all.

 

Hi Nick. Thank you very much! Yeah, my english is very bad. Still learning while carrying my dictionary around. Hopefully I can improve it in the future.

As for the Google I never know about it and thank for highlighting it. I'll do some changes right away.

Any other comment and advice is highly appreciated

Cheers!
Sha

 

No, your English really is very very good! Please don't take my comment as a criticism. There are a lot of native English speakers who don't write as well as you do!

 

Ops.. hehe. I guess I got a bit confuse over there. Sorry to you and thanks for the compliment. Compare with other members in here I still got a long way to go...

Back to the topic, anyone else who wish to review is highly welcomed. I also got contest forum and contest blog if you like to review.

Cheers!
Sha

 

Hi, try to create borders for color blocks and change font size a bit, because current size makes your site slightly unreadable.

 

Aha. Got it .. Didnt notice that. Thanks for highlighting

Anymore advice is highly appreciated..

Cheers!
Sha

 

Your site would not load for me.

 

very clean, and easy to access landing page. I would use a different color for hover links.

 

colors should be improved i think. this looks simple.

 

Yes, it do look very simple and can be improved more. Your text of logo on top left part of the page can more highlighted.

 

Thanks for all the comments and suggestion. I've make some changes but still havent added any CSS for the hovering effect. Between these 2 version, which one do you like more?

1) Contest Portal A
2) Contest Portal B

Cheers!
Sha