Hey, Review My E-cover Title Text

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by gohard, Sep 17, 2007.

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    (title)
    Top-Level Trainer
    (sub-head)
    The New, Definitive Guide of Personal Training
    (sub, sub head)
    Earn the Income, Live the Life, and Jump to the Top of the World’s Greatest Profession!

    I'm a little worried it's too wordy - will appreciate any input or edits you can give me -

    (and yeah, I know it's a little bit of a bite of T.Ferris's title)
     
    gohard, Sep 17, 2007 IP
  2. forumrating

    forumrating Notable Member

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    subtitle can be Personal training guide if u feel current one is too long.

    i would have been more glad to review your design then content.
     
    forumrating, Sep 17, 2007 IP
  3. Lhlalyam

    Lhlalyam Well-Known Member

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    First line maybe:

    Training for Trainors

    Just a thought.

    Lhlalyam
     
    Lhlalyam, Sep 17, 2007 IP