If by ads you mean the Fat Loss 4 Idiots and the other one beneath it, I did those myself... I will probably change my introductory to the first page Arbitrage, thanks for that.
Okay, I've finally finished my sitemap, and need some pointers on SEO... What has the best effect with SEO? If I create a description for my website with about 15 long-tail keywords, would that help my traffic a good bit?
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Pretty good I would say kill the adsense ads right noww! I would also say try to get your reviews about the fold (on the first page before scrolling down) At make them stand out more what I usually do when I do reviews is I put a screen shot of the book cover in the review. Also add padding between your pictures and text. Also did you do the website design your self? It looks good. Good Luck
Why take out the Adsense? If I moved the reviews to the top, wouldn't that look a bit out of order? Yes, I did design it myself, thank you for the compliment!
You should take out adsense becuase you are loosing sales. You will be loosing hops to adsense and the couple cents you'll make from adsense definitely is not worth it. Never put adsense on a clickbank site it kills your conversions. It might look a little out of order is you moved it thats why I am saying if there is way try and figure out how at least you can move it closer. Or make the reviews bigger and vibrant bigger I mean more eye catching with images of the products so it will catch their attention.
Hey nice I like that a lot more I would still suggest you add images of the product or product website and add padding to images in "Why Get This?" And your other pages also. And I would suggest making the second product 4 1/2 instead of 5 just to be clear that the top one is the best. I also like how the read more goes to a more in depth review and the titles goes to your hop thats good. I would suggest making your main heading a bit bigger centering it and put it in quotes. Also if you send me the logo psd I have a quick idea to make the text a little more web 2.0 which go well with ur site and eye ball design. And I think the flow is better now. Its looking good!
Alright, I've added a border around all of the images, and added the 4.5 star image and rating. I use Fireworks for my graphics so there is no .psd file... What did you have in mind though? (I did the logo in Fireworks as well) I didn't see your comment about the heading until now, will do.
Padding is done in CSS it increases the white spaces between the text and images. Found this quick if doesn't make sense google it http://www.htmlite.com/CSS009.php Everything else looks could still think you should add the product image. And for the logo I was thinking gradients and such take a look at my logo in the first link in my sig.
Alright, well I already had padding (vspace and hspace) I'll see if I can get a gradient to look good with the logo, thanks for the tips!
Great logo. Real nice job for your first site. I like the photo of the girl a lot. But I think you could find a better one for the boy. I know it is not easy finding photos of kids on computers. There is a real difference in the quality of those two photos though. Good Luck, Bill.
my one comment ... the text below the "The Focus of YouthEye is..." IMO should be justified rather than centred .... centred text is great for a few words ... but i find justified text much easier on the eye for wordier paragraphs - it's easier to ready easily ... otherwise, good stuff