Heres a new Logo i am working on

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by scurvy, Dec 3, 2009.

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    For a client on oDesk hence the sample watermark.

    what ya think? reckon he'll gimme the job? :(

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    scurvy, Dec 3, 2009 IP
  2. eauncarter

    eauncarter Active Member

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    #2
    Quite a nice design but I think you will have to work a little more on it.
     
    eauncarter, Dec 3, 2009 IP
  3. silverescent

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    i agree.. it needs more work. the font doesn't really suit the graphic..
     
    silverescent, Dec 3, 2009 IP
  4. thefaceless

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    #4
    is the graphic original artwork? it looks like clip art or something.
     
    thefaceless, Dec 3, 2009 IP
  5. Ascendancy

    Ascendancy Active Member

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    I would take off the glowing effect on the text, makes it look kind of cheesy. However I think the graphic and the text go great, no complaints here and I doubt I could do much better :)
     
    Ascendancy, Dec 3, 2009 IP
  6. sososo

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    #6
    pretty cool man keep it up
     
    sososo, Dec 3, 2009 IP
  7. Queen Beez Handbags

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    It's decent but doesn't make me hungry.
     
    Queen Beez Handbags, Dec 7, 2009 IP
  8. scurvy

    scurvy Well-Known Member

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    If u wanna get hungry come over for romp with me ;)
     
    scurvy, Dec 7, 2009 IP
  9. KomodoArts

    KomodoArts Greenhorn

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    #9
    looks grt...a little detailing will make it more realistic !
     
    KomodoArts, Dec 7, 2009 IP
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    I think the image and the text are fighting for competition a little too much
     
    Drdrip, Dec 7, 2009 IP
  11. eslucky

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    #11
    A little busy, but may go over well with the Spanish speaking market I am assuming they are going for. Good job!
     
    eslucky, Dec 7, 2009 IP
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    BoGFx Active Member

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    #12
    I think you should let the images dominate it somehow then have no glow text.
     
    BoGFx, Dec 7, 2009 IP
  13. KingQub3d

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    #13
    Looks great, but you can always improve on the Font of the text.
     
    KingQub3d, Dec 7, 2009 IP
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    I'm cooking some mean grilled food come on over you will get hungry :D
     
    br3adman, Dec 7, 2009 IP
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    #15
    looks great art
     
    nashhull, Dec 8, 2009 IP
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    #16
    I'm not sure about this... I think it looks a tiny bit 'cheesy'. Maybe you should try desaturating it a little because it's a bit too colourful for it to be placed on a professional website... overall the design is good though and I think you've got a good chance of getting the job. =]
     
    RadioBounce, Dec 8, 2009 IP
  17. tanerokutan

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    #17
    very nice. but you should less color.
     
    tanerokutan, Dec 10, 2009 IP
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    #18
    i think its nice..but i think some of the colour are not suitable..you should repair it..^_^
     
    alex8055, Jan 10, 2010 IP
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    #19
    Yep the font dosent really fit the graphics but overall is quite nice
     
    esspro, Jan 10, 2010 IP
  20. christinerob

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    #20
    Well I really like it, the colours are great for the subject and it's bold. I do agree that the fruit is a little in the shadow of the text - but that may be the purpose..? .. but then again a picture speaks a thousand words.

    good luck with it and well done.
    Christine
     
    christinerob, Jan 11, 2010 IP