Help with my Sale Page

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by awl03c, Apr 7, 2013.

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    Hey guys,

    I just recently put together a sale page for a new info product I'm launching. Before I start sending traffic and doing conversion testing I wanted to get some feedback on my sale page and how I could improve it. Any tips would be greatly appreciated.

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    awl03c, Apr 7, 2013 IP
  2. geegel

    geegel Well-Known Member

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    With a product in this price range, a long sales letter tends to be counterproductive. An alternative format would suit you better. I recently obtained a 400% improvement in the conversion rate (yeah, you've read that right) by going with this approach.

    Remember, persuasion isn't worth a dime if it's not accompanied by clarity.
     
    geegel, Apr 9, 2013 IP
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    DovieKnoll Active Member

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    It is important to be straight-forward to avoid loss of interest. Be creative too!
     
    DovieKnoll, Apr 9, 2013 IP