Help with a graphic

Hey everybody, I need some help with an image I've been working on. I am trying to make a luggage tag looking thing. This is what I have now... the bottom is the mouse over. anyone have any ideas on how to improve it ? I don't really like the font. and Im not crazy about the mouse over image.






any ideas or help would be greatly appreciated. If you could re-work it to make it look better, Ill pay you $5

 

Just few ideas,
Background color does not blend with the font color. You can try a dark background with brighter font color. Font color of the mouse over image can be brighter than the normal one.
Yes, overall it’s not look like a neat work.

 

Im not that great with image work. Would you care to take a stab at it? Try a font that you think looks better?

 

Some repair work,




Unfortunately I have no time for revisions.

 

make the hover a dark brown, like leather. and will look good

 

Here's how I would do it.

 

I try to make one repair work, I have only little time to do this, so...have a look:

 

Good graphic work.

 

none of the above look any good?
Maybe im not thinking but why the tag...for apply now
Try a ticket??
The toe tag with apply now just dont look good

 

Actually I like the mouse over image. But indeed the font doesn't fit well. Take a look at dafont.com for a free handwritten font, and try putting the opacity to 70% or something so the text blends better with the tag.

 

doesnt blend well

 

here goes a tutorial for tags you can read on...

http://psd.tutsplus.com/tutorials/designing-tutorials/create-a-textured-tag-for-your-website/

 

and you welcome...

 

the string should come off the corner part..other then thta this one is themost perfect one