help to choose some wording

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by BioPod, Feb 25, 2008.

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    Hi, since english is not my first language, I some times find it hard to choose the right words for the right job, especially when it comes to copywriting.

    Can someone suggest me some good promotion words, like "time limited offer" and such.

    The sentence will appear in a banner that offers 15% discount.

    Thanks all
     
    BioPod, Feb 25, 2008 IP
  2. btsx

    btsx Well-Known Member

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    the more common ways of wording that phrase would be "limited time offer" or "time is limited on this offer"
     
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    jill_domains Peon

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    The best way to do this, is to go to any good sales letter, and see how they have written it.

    These guys have been doing internet marketing for around 10-12 years now - just see it (no affiliate link - this is the direct URL):
    http://www.marketingtips.com/tipsltr.html

    And see how he has presented the time sensitive offer.

    If English is not your first language, see the web sites of the gurus, learn and adapt! :D

    Best of luck!
     
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    astup1didiot Notable Member

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    "15% Off for a Limited Time"
     
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    jrbiz Acclaimed Member

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    Offer Expires Soon. Act Now!
     
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