Help review may landing page

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by yoes_san, Jun 3, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi I'm new at marketing stuffs and just have finish my first landing page.

    The landing page is here.

    And the ads that'll lead to the page is this:
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    My idea is to have visitors come in to the page, select birth year to get the zodiac, select pendants and checkout.

    Let me know what you think about this.
     
    yoes_san, Jun 3, 2009 IP
  2. Kosmix5

    Kosmix5 Peon

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    Great job! Easy to use, and having the option to purchase items on the front page (without having to search) is a really good idea. However, it's a little plain and could use some superficial design work to make it more visually appealing. I would start with the logo.
     
    Kosmix5, Jun 3, 2009 IP
  3. yoes_san

    yoes_san Peon

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    Thanks, I'll look on that
     
    yoes_san, Jun 3, 2009 IP
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    It looks fantastic.
     
    kaioken89, Jun 3, 2009 IP
  5. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    I like the concept of your site but the design is not attractive.Need to get an attractive template which is very important to make sales.
     
    netdriver788, Jun 4, 2009 IP