Hi, I'm in the process of launching my new landing page service. First off, I know there's not a lot of examples but most clients don't want their LP's used in a portfolio. Let me know what you guys think of the design so far. The URL is www.landingpower.com
Wow Jesse - liked the site, colors and feel - couple of suggestions. When I go to the site (Firefox) I see all the wrong things - The name of the site is small, I get a BIG Welcome and a big PRICE. The examples with color are below the fold. I barely see - let's start with some examples - which by the way are great - almost better than the one you did for yourself! My personal opinion is that there should be more above the fold, the price should be below the fold and a short explanation above the fold. don't hit the customer with the price right away because you will find that people click away when they see a price but may not have when they see the value of what you provide first. I think the graphic around the "W" in power is meant to be an explosion? But not sure that it adds to the logo of the site - of course that is really a personal opinion and makes absolutely no difference in the conversion of the site. The buttons on the top "order now" etc. could be smaller to allow more words above the fold. Maybe there could be a short explanation above the buttons that could be a long headline type of thing. Or you could even take the short sentence (MINUS THE "NEW" - don't say you are new ) that is next to the Welcome and put it above the buttons, get rid of the welcome and that would bring up the examples above the fold. Enough of my 2 cents! Warmly, Gail