Help me writing a description for my site please.

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    ishiro, Jun 1, 2008 IP
  2. LoCo

    LoCo Well-Known Member

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    #2
    you could use

    "Watch Funny Commercials, Banned Commercials, Beer Commercials, International Commercials, Sexy Commercials, Sports Commercials and many more"

    This is just a quick one, according to your content, i dont know if this are the keywords you aim for, but this should give you a clue of how a keyword rich description could/should look alike..

    I hope this helps
    regards.
     
    LoCo, Jun 1, 2008 IP
  3. ishiro

    ishiro Active Member

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    #3
    Thank you very much for that try LoCo, but i'm looking for something more than just using keywords to write a description.
    For exemple : Video site showing funny television commercials ...
     
    ishiro, Jun 1, 2008 IP
  4. LoCo

    LoCo Well-Known Member

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    well from my expirience it is not such an good idea, atleast not for serp, i was using aswell description not just made of keywords, i tried to describe my site very well and catchy for the user, but my serp was very low with such a description, where other sites in my niche just had a keyword rich title and description like in the example above and had a better serp because of the amount of keywords used which equaled to a higher relevance then my description

    i have a couple of diffrent sites in diffrent niches and for all of them it helped me to stuck up the title/description with keywords, atleast this assured a higher serp without even doing backlinks

    but this is my personal expirience, could always turn out diffrent for you. Just give it a try like change your description and give it a month and check the results, then try changing your description/title and see if it makes a diffrence, its always good if you expiremnt on your own, this way you can assure the best result for your niche

    anyways good luck to you, anymore questions, feel free to ask
    regards
     
    LoCo, Jun 1, 2008 IP
  5. ishiro

    ishiro Active Member

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    I agree with you,
    what do you think of "Watch Sexy, banned, beer, sports and international commercials." ? i still think it needs something more :(
     
    ishiro, Jun 1, 2008 IP
  6. Cherryone

    Cherryone Peon

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    Here's my suggestion:

    “So Funny Commercials website is a place to find funny domestic and international ads and sport videos. Whether you want to find sexy commercials or banned ads, Funny Commercials is the place to find them all.”

    Hope it helps!
     
    Cherryone, Jun 2, 2008 IP
  7. ishiro

    ishiro Active Member

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    thanks Cherryone you're very close..
     
    ishiro, Jun 5, 2008 IP
  8. Cherryone

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    Thanks Ishiro. When writing a meta description remember to use the keywords that are most important to you and incorporate them into your sentences, so it is grammatical and sound. Do not simple put a list of keywords. Also, try to avoid commas when possible.

    Also, keep in mind that it is a marketing piece that your potential visitors may see in search engines.
     
    Cherryone, Jun 6, 2008 IP
  9. ishiro

    ishiro Active Member

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    Ok thanks, any last suggestion ?
     
    ishiro, Jun 9, 2008 IP
  10. ranjuse

    ranjuse Banned

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    I dont think its a description.. these are only keywords.........


     
    ranjuse, Jun 23, 2008 IP
  11. Cherryone

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    True that Ranjuse ;)
     
    Cherryone, Jul 1, 2008 IP
  12. Ali Sher

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    Hi,
    submitexpress.com

    Plz check this link i hope it will give help you

    Bye
     
    Ali Sher, Jul 2, 2008 IP