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Help me write title

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by priya123, Jul 12, 2014.

  1. jrbiz

    jrbiz Illustrious Member

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    #21
    If his profile stats are right, the OP posted on July 13th and has not been back to DP since. He never replied to posts that day and missed half the posts which occurred on later dates. Probably told his friends that he asked for advice on DP and never got any help. :)
    SEMrush
     
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    #22
    I would probably stay clear of using Zendesk in the title. Once your product gets some credibility and users then you can look at comparing your product to there's however while you are launching try to come up with something thats catchy but sums up your product. I personally like something simple like XYZ - Faster system, Better support. Or you could try something like 'our system $xx, there system $xx, the difference??? Nothing. Save $$ using XYZ' Not overly catchy, but hopefully it gives you some ideas.
     
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    gentilly Member

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    #23
    Hahaha i just noticed this... well i just wasted 3 minutes of my life that i'll never get back :)

    Everyone always wants a quick fix. Post on a forum and expect 100 answers in 30 seconds hahaha
     
    gentilly, Dec 2, 2014 IP
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    Content Maestro Notable Member

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    #24
    Well, not exactly wasted because your ideas (and everyone's who has contributed so far to this thread) can be a valuable reference for anyone looking to create a title or slogan for their product.:)
    Quite right. And on a forum with this size and traffic, it would not be an exaggeration to say that people expect a hundred more in half the time.:)
     
    Content Maestro, Dec 2, 2014 IP
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    workingaswriter Well-Known Member

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    #25
    I think the title can be like this:

    Cost Effective Software Like Zen Desk

    So here we are stating:

    1. Less price
    2. Similarity
    3. Briefing that the product is similar to Zen desk
     
    workingaswriter, Dec 16, 2014 IP
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    01123581321345589144 Active Member

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    #26
    I think Content Maestro is right on target with those ideas. I don't know Zendesk but try something like what Content Maestro said like cheaper alternative to Zendesk, cost effective might sound better I don't know. Do a poll of potential buyers about titles. See what appeals to people. Do a poll on here even. I liked XYZ, the power of Zendesk is now affordable! but you could use any combination of those in your promoting.

    EDIT: I actually agree that maybe it's dangerous to use the word Zendesk because of legal stuff and maybe you need to separate yourself from them. But it also sounds like you want to associate with them.... so I don't know.
     
    01123581321345589144, Jan 7, 2015 IP
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    Melisa455 Active Member

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    #27
    Your software sounds familiar. Do you sell it on warrior forum?
     
    Melisa455, Jan 26, 2015 IP
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    Content Maestro Notable Member

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    #28
    I don't think the OP will (ever) be back to answer your question.:)
     
    Content Maestro, Jan 26, 2015 IP
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    #29
    Okay. It is fine.
     
    Melisa455, Jan 30, 2015 IP
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    departurearea Peon

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    #30
    Put Zendesk in the subheader or do a play on its name.

    XYZ, Putting the zen back in customer service
     
    departurearea, Feb 4, 2015 IP
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    nisjet Active Member

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    Customer service software and support ticket software, simplified. Used by hundreds of professionals worldwide.
     
    nisjet, Apr 4, 2015 IP
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    7gmedia Peon

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    #32
    Yeah ! Title seems good to me as well
     
    7gmedia, Apr 15, 2015 IP
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    XYZ - enough meditations for today, concentrate on your clients already
     
    s3m, Apr 20, 2015 IP
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    #34
    You have to put your main keyword in the title.
     
    adamw33, Apr 20, 2015 IP
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    #35
    Remember, Google has a limit for the title what they show in results. They don't use the whole page when showing results only 1 third of it.

    So your title needs to be within 55 characters or less else some words wont even show to searchers in the results!

    It's not to say that you shouldn't have a homepage title longer than 55 characters. But just that Google only "shows" so many in the SERP results anyway.
     
    Mkcoy, Apr 20, 2015 IP
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    KylieSweet Well-Known Member

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    #36
    Its not just putting your main keyword within the title. It will require an interesting and unique title that is noticeable by the targeted audience.
     
    KylieSweet, Apr 20, 2015 IP
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    #37
    I have to agree with Jennifer don't put a company name in the tag line it takes away from the "punch"... Have you thought about using the tried using the dictionary and thesaurus?
     
    Burke Ferguson, May 22, 2015 IP
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    #38
    Ok, seems this thread became "independent", a kind of lesson about titles and services with similar features.

    Anyway, so we can say the most important things agreed by anyone are:

    1) never use the name of other services in your title. Yes, you need to be unique and create a brand. Otherwise it's like you worked to grab money only without giving anything valuable to your customers.

    2) you have to get the chance to add new features. Again, you need to make a brand, and explain why your service is better. Just making a cheap software is not a good idea.

    3) titles must be attractive and at the same time explain your uniqueness. And I think titles can really change a lot your success since can bring the traffic you need to survive in the initial difficult months.
     
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    #39
    I'm not familiar with the software but I've got a couple of tips.

    Firstly, I'd agree with the poster above - don't use Zendesk if not many of your audience have heard of it.

    Secondly, write down half a dozen benefits of the new software and choose the most important one. Then work it into the title.

    Titles will dictate whether the rest of the article is read, so it's worth putting a lot of effort into it. They need to be extremely benefit-driven.
     
    Splash Copywriters, Sep 1, 2015 IP
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    This Slide You Provide with tips & ideas related to each of the qualities that a successfully Unique ARTICLE writing must have.
     
    salahuddinripon, Dec 12, 2015 IP