Help me to create a "Superb" blog.. Hot Gadgets and Phones...

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    meshantha, Nov 3, 2010 IP
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    Sir,
    No need to confuse yourself by asking everyone of there opinions,thank the God, he has given you great brains.
     
    10star, Nov 6, 2010 IP
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    The design is very 2001 - you need a sharper header section given your subject matter.

    Get someone to proof read your copy, you have spaces before commas and other oddities in the text. Not a terribly inspiring writing style but I doubt I am the target market :)
     
    sarahk, Nov 18, 2010 IP