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Help Critique My Landing Page

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by phonesis, May 29, 2009.

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    Hello there,
    Kindly critique my sales letter in a constructive manner.Find it at http://bloggingmillionare.com/secretsystem.html
     
    phonesis, May 29, 2009 IP
  2. hasnatme

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    #2
    looks like common email spam page.
     
    hasnatme, May 29, 2009 IP
  3. Rodder7

    Rodder7 Active Member

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    good page. i would add some more testimonials and a good header based on your domain name(great tld i might add).
     
    Rodder7, May 29, 2009 IP
  4. MichealP

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    Hi Phonesis.

    Took a look and I like it overall. Here are my critiques:

    * Your footer image is immediately below your header image, with your content below all that.

    * I like the ebook cover. It's very clear. There is a lot of space above the title on the front of the cover. I would recommend that you put your name in that area, or move everything up and put your name on the bottom.

    * Change your bullets into images. There are plenty of places that you can find some to download for free if you don;t want to invest any money on them.

    To your success,
    Mike
     
    MichealP, May 31, 2009 IP
  5. pipes

    pipes Prominent Member

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    Its typical of what i see, not too long a page which is better than some.
     
    pipes, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  6. justinlorder

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    The border color are too deep . Try to use light color.
     
    justinlorder, Jun 1, 2009 IP