Help Critique My Landing Page

Hello there,
Kindly critique my sales letter in a constructive manner.Find it at http://bloggingmillionare.com/secretsystem.html

 

looks like common email spam page.

 

good page. i would add some more testimonials and a good header based on your domain name(great tld i might add).

 

Hi Phonesis.

Took a look and I like it overall. Here are my critiques:

* Your footer image is immediately below your header image, with your content below all that.

* I like the ebook cover. It's very clear. There is a lot of space above the title on the front of the cover. I would recommend that you put your name in that area, or move everything up and put your name on the bottom.

* Change your bullets into images. There are plenty of places that you can find some to download for free if you don;t want to invest any money on them.

To your success,
Mike

 

Its typical of what i see, not too long a page which is better than some.

 

The border color are too deep . Try to use light color.