i have just set up this squeeze page i have had around 750 unique visits and no sign ups ive checked everything is working fine im just lost to fidure out what the problem is so maybe an out side eye can help! http://those1kdays.com
I've just taken a very quick look and there are quite a few spelling mistakes. You've got im instead of I'm, wory instead of worry, and gauranteed instead of guaranteed.
I would focus more on the video. I would also invest in a copwriter if you have the money. And maybe even have someone who designs squeeze pages to give you some pointers.