Health Logo Contest -- $25

here's my first attempt

feedback is very much appreciated.

 

Here are 3 different fonts..

 

Hope this is what you mean.

 

- jnjnnino: Thanks but this is not quite what we are looking for.

- onlyfights: So, I spoke with my friend and he said that he didn't care for the man in the design (he said that it reminds him of a gym). Personally, I think he is crazy, but it's his logo. Could you remove the man. Also, could you have the power button centered (instead of tilted to the right). It would be great to look at these three fonts with the above changes. Thanks for your efforts.

- procrusher: I am fairly sure this is what my friend wants. Plus, it looks great. Just a few suggestions, could you move "Turn It On" to the right, under "Power Nutrition." Also, could you move the power button more to the left and have "Power Nutrition" on one line and "Turn It On" and a second line.

 

jackieh1791, My friend really likes how you laid out the text. He likes your power button but feels it is too thick. Could you make it more slender? Thanks.

 

Ok i see what you mean. Will post right away.

 

Anything is changable.

I'll check back for more info tommorow.

 

Hi, here's my entry, feedback appreciated, thanks

 

- procrusher: Thanks for making all these changes, we are definitely getting there. Let's move "Turn It On" closer to "Power Nutrition" so that it is right underneath. Also, can we try a different font for "Turn It On," and have "Power Nutrition" have the same black and red outline. One last thing, let's move back to a white background. I like the misty clouds but it won't work for the website. Again, thanks for your hard work.

- MantisArt: Thanks for joining! I am huge fan of your work!! And you did not let me down with this logo! I like this a lot. My only recommendation is to make "Turn It On" bigger.

 

Hi, thanks, I really appreciated that, here's the resize

 

MantisArt, thanks for changing the font size! It looks great. My friend has gone to bed (it's 12:30am here), but I will let you know his thoughts first thing tomorrow.

 

Here is my entry...

 

just to know my idea and luck with this one with different style........ hope you like it.



Regards,
Rice
KEEP IT SIMPLE!!!

 

Here is my creation:



Hope you and everyone else like it.

I know this is not perfect, so I will wait for positive criticism

 

this is my try

 

.. here you go..

 

Hi, other try.
%100 vector.

 

My try (Consider the spelling mistake as a watermark):

 

General Note: It looks like we are really struggling with the font for "Turn it On." Speaking with my friend he said that he used the snowwrite font and really likes it. If we can use that font or something really, really close I think we will get nearer to what he wants. Here are some sample shots of that font.




MantisArt: I spoke with my friend and he really likes your logo. He only suggests that you put "Turn It On" under "Power Nutrition." Also, if you can get the font of "Turn It On" closer to a snowwrite font that would be great.

^_^DesignGuru: The lightening bolt is original but not what we are looking for. Thanks.

logorice: Nice job on adding the seed. I had no idea what it was but my friend picked it up right away. The only suggestion I have is to make sure the slogan says "Turn It On" and not "Turn In On" (or maybe your are like jokomamamita who is using the misspelling as her watermark =) ).


RaduTRIFAN: Out of the three that you summitted my friend really liked this logo:


He particularly liked how you designed "Power Nutrition" to be similar to the power button. Two suggestions: First, ditch the "Turn It On" font, what you are using really ruins the whole design. If you can get the font a little closer to snowwrite font I think you would do well. Secondly, he liked the lightening in your other powerbutton. Could you take the lightening affect and put it into the power button of this design?

MINI_JOSE: Sorry, not what we are looking for.

Xdexter: This looks good.

prochusher: Nice job! Now the only thing we have to perfect is the font for "Turn It On." It is still not quite there. I recommend using the snowwrite font if you have it or something similar.

Aphanius mento: I appreciate your redesign, but it doesn't seem that you are following the suggestions I've shared in this thread. You need to use red, your power button needs to look like a power button, and the font for "Turn It On" is way off. Hope this helps.

jokomamamita: I guess misspelling is one way to make sure someone doesn't rip off your logo =). I like your logo but the power button needs to be more prominent. People need to know exactly what that symbol is.