Headline Help for My Salespage

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by imiconcepts, May 28, 2021.

  1. #1
    Hi Everyone,

    I sell a belly fat loss weight loss product for women. Here's a headline I'm using, the variation of the headline has been used quite a bit. But the headline describes the title of the book. I'm having a mind-blank for new ideas. Here's the headline:

    "How I Went From Fat To
    Fabulous the Natural Way"

    Thanks in advance for your thoughts and opinions.
     
    imiconcepts, May 28, 2021 IP
  2. mmerlinn

    mmerlinn Prominent Member

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    Belly dance your way to losing your belly fat.

    or maybe

    Belly fat? Belly dance!
     
    Last edited: May 28, 2021
    mmerlinn, May 28, 2021 IP
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    Spoiltdiva Acclaimed Member

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    "Dance your way out of the Jelly Belly Blues."
     
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    imiconcepts Active Member

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    These are great suggests thanks, but how would you rephrase this headline:

    "How I Went From Fat To Fabulous the Natural Way"
     
    imiconcepts, May 29, 2021 IP
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    hello_welcome Well-Known Member

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    My secret formula for Fat To Fabulous with Natural Way
     
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    Leadnetwork Member

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    My Way From Fat To Fabulous the Natural Way
     
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    JoeSpirit Well-Known Member

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    "Fat To Fabulous Acting Naturally"
     
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    jrbiz Acclaimed Member

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    "Fat to Fab, Naturally"

    "Fat Belly to Fab Abs, Naturally"
     
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    usaukclassifieds Well-Known Member

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    1. Belly dance can help you lose weight organically.
    2. Lose abdominal fat with this weight loss method.
     
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