What you don't get in your head? This is contest not chat! You will change this too? Small update to job. Put little more colors. http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/7569/lllllwan1.gif I hope you like it
thanks for entries so far, here is some feedback googlerankmaniac: your second one is better, but still doesn't have the wow factor, mowing is spelled wrong and I'm not a fan of the pink darike: has an ok look to it, but some of the photo's do not relate to this business, it is mainly residential work, also mowing is spelled wrong and I don't like the pink angelart: It is simple, but I like it, maybe you could change the text 'property maintenance business' to 'Lawn and Garden Maintenance' and remove the word 'includes' before 'lawn mowing'. Also remove the green background and have the slides fill the full frame. Didrapost: not the format I am after and if you are able to modify your post can you remove the name of the business. I am still waiting for a few more entries that have contacted me via pm. Thanks again so far
These look pretty good darike, the images look fine, maybe you can just change the grey background to a green and change the text from 'lawn mowing and gardening' to "We do the work so you don't have to". Oh and Fertilising is spelled with a s in Australia also if you could just add the URL of the site at the bottom left in small writing without the www. Contest ends in about 12 hours, I have also received a couple via pm
Im not sure if its will look good without Grey. and that text is a bit too long.. Any more feedback will be welcome.! I hope you like it
hmm, is there a way you can have the text start from the top?... If it is too long try just having 'Let us do the work for you'. You are probably right about the grey background looking better. I do like the right side, It is just the text on the left not working.
Yes of course, but i dont think its will look good then. ... ok that will probably be more better. Ok I will think about it. and try to make different versions..
Maybe this text will be better : 1Version 2version 3version 4version something a bit different : 1v2v I hope you like what you see