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Contest Header Logo Graphics Contest for Online Sweet Shop - $50 Prize

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by JagoHarry, Sep 10, 2009.

  1. Nasweefpn

    Nasweefpn Peon

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    #21
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    SEMrush
     
    Nasweefpn, Sep 11, 2009 IP
    SEMrush
  2. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #22
    They're ok. I'm looking for something really eye catching.... and they're not for me.

    It feels a little basic, not very bold at all.

    Doesn't meet requirements. Very basic design. Wrong product in graphic!
     
    JagoHarry, Sep 13, 2009 IP
  3. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #23
    Sorry, but all of your designs are too basic and don't meet the requirements at all.

    Nice bold graphic, but its not entirely obvious what the graphic is. The font is pretty hard to read too and is just not very bold.

    Thank you all!
    Dan
     
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  4. pheonix89

    pheonix89 Active Member

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    #24
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    Anything can be changed according to your feedback
     
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    Sabosushimi Active Member

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    #25
    hope youll like this
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    #26
    i will repost... pls. wait........

    revised....

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    Last edited: Sep 14, 2009
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    suke Active Member

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    #27
    here is the revision :D

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  8. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #28
    Very nice! Don't like the border around Online. Could you make the text a bit larger still, and experiment with the colours for each word of the Online Sweet Shop text please? Also, it feels as if the colours are a little faded. Could you make the colours of the sweets and text darker to make them feel more intense? The background colour is fine.

    So far, this design is my favourite!

    Wow, very bold indeed! However, the colours don't seem to work, and I don't want a tagline. Don't like the lollypop on the O. The choice of font is great. Perhaps have some sweet-like objects in the background?

    Nice choice of font. Sorry, but I don't like the bar across the logo, or the colours, or the choice of graphics in the background (they don't look like sweets to me).


    Very good improvements! Great choice of font and background graphics. This is my 2nd favourite (same level as the other one).

    Could you remove the yellow sweet behind Online Sweet Shop please? Also remove the candy canes behind shop? I want the name to be uncluttered.

    Perhaps make the words of Online Sweet Shop different colours (using the same colours I use for the background but the same darkness you've used for pink).

    Thank you!
    Dan
     
    JagoHarry, Sep 14, 2009 IP
  9. suke

    suke Active Member

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    #29
    something like this? :D

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    suke, Sep 14, 2009 IP
  10. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #30
    Yep, that's looking great! Could you try using a blue for one word, and green for another in Online Sweet Shop? So that the words are all different colours, but using the core colours pink, blue and green?

    Thanks
    Dan
     
    JagoHarry, Sep 14, 2009 IP
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    suke Active Member

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    #31
    like this?

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  12. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #32
    Yes, exactly like that. Fantastic, well done! This is now my top favourite design!
     
    JagoHarry, Sep 14, 2009 IP
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    #33
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    Anything can be changed according to your feedback
     
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  14. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #34
    The background is much better in the 2nd version. However the text colouring just doesn't work. It doesn't match the other colours in the design.

    Thanks
    Dan
     
    JagoHarry, Sep 14, 2009 IP
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    renderwork Well-Known Member

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    #35
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    pheonix89 Active Member

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    #36
    Revised entry according to your feedback

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    #37
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    revision. all 100% vector.
     
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  18. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #38
    Looks fantastic! Very impressed, my new favourite! Could you make 'Sweet' green and 'Shop' pink? It's just so that the emphasis shifts to sweet rather than shop due to how the colours stand out?

    A very interesting use of font. Good job!

    Very nice indeed. Well done!
     
    JagoHarry, Sep 15, 2009 IP
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    renderwork Well-Known Member

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  20. JagoHarry

    JagoHarry Well-Known Member

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    #40
    I prefer the first one. However, could you make 'Online' and 'Shop' brighter to match the intensity of sweet? So 'Online' would be a brighter blue, and 'Shop' would be a brighter pink?

    Also, could you do a full size example? Happy for you to put a watermark on it.

    Thanks
    Dan
     
    JagoHarry, Sep 15, 2009 IP