not bad, but you have a bucha space in the botton, what is it for. You have very big pictures there, seems you used some software like Adobe ImageReady to generate the HTML, you can use small sized pics in the background and get a smaller sized page with the same outlook you have now I think the WEBDESIGN section examples are either useless or you have to make them bigger than 50px high pics have you code edited before putting online. Have some keywords there, etc. You need to spend some time on your site
My thoughts: 1. The site is too dark for my tastes. I think it gives off the wrong tone. It's like a stormy winter day. Brighten it up a little. 2. The About Me section should be rewritten. I'm not sure if you are just putting filler text in there now, but if not, I suggest you change it. You say No need to say that. Your customers will judge you on your work, not your age or experience. Let your work speak for you. Don't depreciate yourself and don't bring up your youth and inexperience. Try something like "Designing is my passion. I treat each project with the highest standards and customer service...." You get the picture. Confidence and belief in yourself are essential to your success. 3. Make the Message part of the Contact Me section bigger.
Under it, it says preview. And, where can I get some quality keywords, becuase really I don't feel like typing them out.