Graphic Review please (ad idea)

I have an ad idea for the summer.. it's just for getting my business's name out there (not really selling anything unless they're interested )

What do you think about the design? I was thinking about creating a series of similar graphics as on the below

Thanks!

 

pretty outstanding work.
love the concept. seems like your aiming to a more
modern crowd of people.

the banner on the image i would rotate to such a angle.
that would probly be the only thing i'd say to slightly alter
other than that.
i'd love to know how you did it.

 

Thanks Yes, a more youthful crowd indeed (what I love!!). The neat psychological trick I did with the slant of the logo is that people look at it longer so it stays in their brain slightly longer. The things you learn in Psychology

 

Very nice graphics. Only with her face is something I don't like.

 

1. Face tone really weird
2. The design not very welcoming. Maybe because all of them are in black

Sorry not flaming but just not my taste. It doesn't mean that others don't like it too Although it is targeted to teenagers and modern culture, some how it doesn't look modern. Just my opinion. Nice effort though

 

Thanks for your comment It's definitely dark (what I was going for). And yes, there's a specific audience for it

 

Love the style. Only complaint is the writing in the top right is ugly.

 

I love the whole idea and everything, looks great!

 

i think one thing is not good.the word(nufrosh) at the top is not readable i think.
maybe its nor written "nufrosh".i just guess

 

mmm, nice graphic but can I just make some points:
The gothic text at the top is always hard to read, you've at least sensibly used lower case letters but its complicated by its intrusion into the border. Use of such a gothic font (fraktur?) will relay a message to your audience which conflicts with the modern approach elsewhere. That's not to say its wrong but perhaps it could be modernised. The flourishes you've given it don't work for me but perhaps that's my typographical background arguing. Maybe try using these flourishes as hair strands of a different shade.
If this graphic is reduced will you still read your name/web and email details at the bottom? at half size? quarter size? Graphics that work well take into account the variety of uses and sizes they may encounter.
The image of the girl is very subservant, that might be what you wish to suggest with her eyes closed and arms pushing. If its not what you wish to portray you should be very aware of that and its implications especially considering the rest of your graphic style.

 

yeah i would deff make that box at a lesser angle... other wise its very nice