gmpoint.net a social network for networkers and business man

hello guys,i've been a while setting up this social network
it's gmpoint.net
it's a social network,it can be great for networkers and business men,
check it out and tell me what you think
gmpoint

 

I strongly suggest revising the paragraph on the homepage. There are a lot of problems.

My suggestion:

 

well,i did a lot of inhansement to the front page,check it out

 

ok website. are u getting a good response for the website?

 

It looks better now but there still are some changes you should make to the opening sentence:

 

thanks for your critics