Give Me Your Honest Opinion on My Portfolio Site

Discussion in 'Design' started by Nicholas Tuma, Jan 6, 2022.

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    Hi all. I would love to hear your critique on my design portfolio. I wanted to keep it simple while letting the work speak for itself. nick-tuma.com/portfolio

    A little about me. I am a small business entrepreneur, strategist and counselor located in Cooper City, Florida.

    I have a passion for both visual and verbal communication. The design process helps individuals identify who they are, establish brand affinity and meet specific targets. By combining research, brainstorming and a sense of aesthetics, I creates solutions.

    While on the other hand, my verbal and written communication commits to the brand. It creates a passionate and transparent relationship. Communication enriches lives and serves as building blocks for numerous businesses.

    My method and style of creating, listening, and collaborating with partners’ builds trust and a positive working relationship.

    Advertising & Marketing, including, Branding, Brand Streamlining, Story Teller, Researcher, Net-Worker
     
    Nicholas Tuma, Jan 6, 2022 IP
  2. Bella24

    Bella24 Active Member

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    Hi Nicholas
    I checked your portfolio link and it's looking great, very Clean and simple!
     
    Bella24, Jul 14, 2023 IP
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    bijutoha Well-Known Member

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    Hi Nick,
    I took a look at your portfolio and I have a few thoughts. I think it's a good start. You have a clear focus on visual communication, and your work is well-designed and visually appealing.

    Here are a few things I think you could improve:
    • I would like to see more variety in your work. You have a lot of great logos and branding work, but I would like to see more examples of your other skills, such as web design, print design, and advertising.
    • I would also like to see more information about your process. How do you approach a design project? What are your goals for each project? I think it would be helpful for potential clients to know more about your process.
     
    bijutoha, Jul 23, 2023 IP
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    cm2010 Well-Known Member

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    1) When clicking on Logo, it should not go to /home (it will create a duplicate page)
    Such as https://nick-tuma.com/home and https://nick-tuma.com/ ( we will remove both links once you fix them so the search engine doesn't crawl your site with /home

    2) Make it Black dark font, not Gray

    3) View this image (there are more suggestions we can make after your reply)
    https://ibb.co/JszvvTx
     
    cm2010, Aug 16, 2023 IP