The script is nice n cool obviously But are you Sure the "portal" highlights the image of a pakistani girl? since the name outlouds she.com.pk ? make it sure! Dont stuff the site with bollywood ect. Dont erase the theme. Before buying a domain, elucidate the whole scenario in which you're going to implement things. If you lack ideas, do consult with People around in the field. Sorry it might shock you but review is not always = WOWWW! Since this is the true opinion. i told you wht i found there! Since me very much familiar with what "She knows" in Pakistan. And what "she" would should know! Use your ideas, your voice to tell people what they should know... there could be hundreds of people who are making bollywood, fun, entertainment sites; but there would be one or two telling "she" what she knows + what not. keep it up though! its a good attempt. best of luck
I had a tough time with this site. Not a bad time, but I was disoriented by a few things... I didn't see your banner at first. As a result, I didn't know what the site was about and if it would be relevant to me. When I did spot your banner, all the type seemed so small or fancy that it wasn't as quick to read as I feel it could have been. I like the template a lot. It's very nice. But my eye tended to jump around and not know exactly what to read first. All the blocks look too much the same, in a way. I did notice your ad on the top right, but it didn't keep my attention long enough. I think you should consider changing the colors if you want clicks over there. Or using image ads maybe. All I can tell you is I should have wanted to read those ads more, but they were dull and black and couldn't compete with all the colorful stuff you have going on over to the left side. I think you're off to a very nice start though.
@Ireej Thanks a lot for you comments. can you please give me some ideas related to this website. My aim to make a website for girls. i held a survey in few girls colleges and universities here in Lahore Pakistan. on the survey results i have made the sections, like showbiz, beauty tips, recipes, etc. If you have any nice idea then please let me know. @vigirench Thanks you too for you suggestions. i will try to do my best to improve this website. Thanks again all of you for your time.