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Get a green...to review my site's design

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by muhammad arif, Nov 27, 2009.

  1. #1
    HI

    I need honest reviews about my new upcoming seo company site's design.
    SEMrush
    http://vocbal.com/24nov/welcome06.html


    I need to forward it for coding..so before sending it there, i decided to get some reviews of dp members.


    I willadd green to your profile, for w honest review.

    Please suggest me anything u want to change in this design,

    Right now its a snapshot, so i need alll the suggestions and feedbacks to cover it before coding.


    Thanks
     
    muhammad arif, Nov 27, 2009 IP
    SEMrush
  2. RazorGlacier

    RazorGlacier Well-Known Member

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    Overall, the design is nice, and flows well. However, I have a few constructive critical marks. ;)

    Firstly, the woman for the support icon needs a transparent background. Otherwise, it throws off the whole color scheme.

    Secondly, you might want to add a left and right border or even feather in the general look.

    Other than those two items, the general design looks nice and reliable. ^_^
     
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  3. muhammad arif

    muhammad arif Well-Known Member

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    Thanks a lot.

    The background of the girl will be made transparent as suggested.


    Looking for some more reviews.




    Arif
     
    muhammad arif, Nov 27, 2009 IP
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    abstroose Notable Member

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    I agree with what RazorGlacier said about the sides. Personally, I think you should give the webpage more of a 'page' feel by reducing the width of page to about 90% - for example: http://www.metafever.com/

    Other than the aforementioned, I think it looks great. The colour scheme is nice, I like the red and black fonts in the navigation bar. Only thing I would change, is I would vertically align the text in the top bar. I think it would look better in the middle.

    I'm not too sure about the red/blue striped bar above the Featured Services section. I think just a solid line or a fade would look better.

    Overall, I think it looks great. Definately suitable for an SEO service website :)
     
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  5. muhammad arif

    muhammad arif Well-Known Member

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    Thanks a lot.


    I am forwarding these reviews to my designer.


    Still waiting for more revies so that i can get a perfect design for my upcoming company.


    Thanks
     
    muhammad arif, Nov 27, 2009 IP
  6. TJ Coldstepper

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    Hi Arif,

    Being industry for long enough. Let me give you some constructive tips.

    For one, the site lacks a good logo. I don't know if you have one under production or if it's the same thing that's gonna be on the main site, but you will need a good logo.

    Second, remove the image of that lady from page. Avoid the use of stock human images in your site as much as possible. It gives your site a very template-ish feel.

    Third, do something about the navigation bar. Considering the color scheme of your website. A black gradient navigation bar with a red hover would look amazing.

    Something like this - except for a red hover.
    [​IMG]

    Also, do you really need a "Client Login" on your page. Change it with a client contact form instead. A simple "Request a Quote" form would help a lot in increasing your sales.

    And lastly, have some over all touch ups added. Maybe a background image etc rather than a plain grey background.

    Good luck.
     
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  7. muhammad arif

    muhammad arif Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for your review.

    I am considering these tips.


    Waiting for more reviews.
     
    muhammad arif, Nov 27, 2009 IP
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    sakto Active Member

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    I find the header with the word Mocbal SEO seems too bare and it pulls down the overall (professional) look of the site.

    However, the colors including the layout is already good enough.
     
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  9. muhammad arif

    muhammad arif Well-Known Member

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    The area u mentioned will get a professional logo.

    The given one is just a formality.

    Thanks for your review.

    Looking for more...
     
    muhammad arif, Nov 27, 2009 IP
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    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    The template and layout is fine and it was good in loading.The color schemes and design of the site impressed me a lot.Only the navigation menu looks very simple and plain now and need to add some effects by adding image or color when we make an hover on it.
     
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    Hello friends,

    We are working for him on this project. The design showed here is designed by us. Kindly PM me if you have some more suggestions so that I can make it more better.

    Thanks
     
    dani4800, Nov 28, 2009 IP
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    Now it looks very good to me
     
    karthik23, Nov 28, 2009 IP
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    The 2 characters beside 24x7 support, they don't go with the site, try finding something going with the site, and the Client Login pic as well. That's all , everything else is good.
     
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    muhammad arif Well-Known Member

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    Thanks to everyone, green added to all.


    Still looking for reviews.



    Thanks


    Arif
     
    muhammad arif, Nov 28, 2009 IP
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    BLuka Active Member

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    One more thing, under the "Login" it says "Forgot your password plz Click Here"

    Why is "pls' inserted in there?

    And make some words bold, those important words, because they are most likely to be checked first.
     
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    muhammad arif Well-Known Member

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    Its been a snap shot, the 'pls' word will be removed, and a sign up link will be added over there.

    And regarding the boldness of words, ya i have forwarded that suggestion to my designer.


    Still looking for perfect reviews.


    Arif
     
    muhammad arif, Nov 28, 2009 IP
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    its looks very nice for me
     
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    Hi Arif,

    Your site was cool and the layout was perfect.....

    Only one Suggestion....Please put a box around or a line between the webdesign service,Web hosting service, Link building SEO Package, Internet Marketing Service and Content Writing....

    If you do that your site look more attractive and good looking.. Just try it Arif... :)
     
    8th wonder, Nov 29, 2009 IP