Future weapons, please review

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    Future weapons is my new website. Please check it out and give your honest opinion and let me know what i should change.
     
    Janck, Feb 16, 2009 IP
  2. ~kev~

    ~kev~ Well-Known Member

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    Overall layout is good.

    The Artillery link is broken.

    Your meta description is full of trash words

    Get rid of the "and, which, are, used in, it, of, are, here" - trash words. Use as many keywords in your meta description as possible.

    Your site does not have an RSS feed? You should really consider adding one.
     
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  3. Oranges

    Oranges Active Member

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    Yeah Design and layout look good, But SEO aspects seems to be down.
    Change your Meta description and Keywords for SERPs.
     
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    Design looks good, I would add a forum as well. So people can discuss weapons of the future. Needs more content too
     
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  5. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    Great site. The designs and layout is good. I think some of the listed weapons in future weapons are also listed in latest weapons like M230, you must remove any one from the both list.
     
    2advance, Feb 16, 2009 IP
  6. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    The design and layout has professional look and it was easy to navigate.But when i click that Weapons A-Z button on top menu bar it ask to me select from the lists of left menu,when i click that i was getting error in loading .I tried with all links and getting same error.[Error 404 - The Webpage cannot be found].Will be great if you take a note and resolve it.Thanks for your effort.
     
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    bz1406 Peon

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    Your design template so much like professional design. I really luv it at all...
     
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    justinlorder Peon

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    It is cool and unique design .
    If there are some videos, it is much better .
     
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  9. Janck

    Janck Active Member

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    ~kev~: i'll fix meta tags soon.
    Oranges: which keywords should i use? I think these are very well searched.
    dasher19: you are right, i will add it as soon as possible.
    netdriver788: i know, website is rather new and i didn't do all the work yet.

    I have a small problem though: i had many indexed pages (around 25) but now if i type site:future-weapons.org i only get 10 hits. Did google erase me from index?
     
    Janck, Feb 17, 2009 IP