Free Blog Reviews!!

I would love one of my business blog- homebizblogger.com

thanks!

 

I'm not sure you should calling a road trip out of chicago a "review".

I would post so many amazon ads on the webpage. Intergrate amazon ads with in a review of that product. IE piano keyboard - amazon piano keyboard ad.

If its a family blog, try to promote family type events. I don't think you achieved that with many of the blog articles and topics. I think the chicago article is a very good example of my point. The things you talked about in that article was boring. The wait in line was 15 minutes, the ticket cost was this this and that. You didn't say why it was remarkable and why I as a reader would want to visit the sears tower. You had one picture which looks like you pulled off line. Show readers more!

 

I like the intro at top of homepage. Its a quick way to get your new visitors to "invest" in your site.

Based on the two most recent articles, you're taking too much of a personal voice. I.E. "Since yesterday there has been a small subject going on on DigitalPoint forums..." bad. Don't depend your articles on forums discussion (especially when you don't link to them.)
And "I thought it was about ...".

Your articles should take a more professional voice. I sometimes take a more personal level which is good at times, but if you do it all the time, you'll lack quality and readability.

 

Hi, 2 Blogs for you

http://www.rl9.org
http://www.ryanlineker.com

Thanks
Ryan

 

Review my blog please : http://gpttipsandtricks.blogspot.com/

 

ooo I've just redone my blog - it needs some love, but be kind its only little!

 

I would love a free review of my blog. Thanks!

http://www.pajamaprofessional.com

 

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Please review mine:Baby First Year

Many Thanks,

Goonie
Baby First Year

 

Really?

Please help me check my site www.winnerlabel.com/winnerlabel

I want to make it as a trading company site

Tnx.

 

http://www.squidoo.com/OBAInfo/

This may take you a while as it is broken down into different modules (book style)

Not sure where you should check first. I am slowly combining the two Questions and Answers modules

Wendy

 

http://whatisgoingonblog.blogspot.com the blog posts are getting better as I get more time to work on it, thanks.

 

would appreciate if you could have a look at http://richgrad.com
thanks!

 

www.newsnotion.com
I'd appreciate it!

 

Please give a review for my Internet affiliate marketing blog. I would love to be on your blog. It is great resource for affiliate beginners. Thanks in advance.

 

Hey,
Things you need to work on:
1. Get your comment count up. Every article I glanced at had 0 comments. Here are some tips to raise your comment count.
2. Too many site reviews! I did two site reviews on my blog and two was too much. Its a good way to please possible subscribers, but your doing it at the expense of your established reader base.
3. Try adding pictures and such. People remember your site by the images they see, and the only image you let them see is an overused wordpress theme. Nothing else to remember you by.

 

I like the navigation positioning. I think what you have to do is make the blog another element of your site. To get people to read your blog, try showing past work and your portfolio (link to it by a link in the navigation), continue to provide wordpress themes and impress visitors with your skills, then people will become interested in what you have to say.

Try to show a preview of the wordpress theme before downloading. I would download not knowing what I was going to get.

 

Kenneth-
Main Site Problem - Your articles are stubs and they don't concentrate around a subject. You must focus on a general topic and stick to it. I wrote an article on this very subject. How does a reader know what to expect when they subscribe, what do you promise them?

No comments on any articles. Here are some tips on getting comments.

All your articles are really short stubs. Don't recycle news (like the gPhone posts). If you have nothing more than a stub of an article, don't publish it. Add more information, opinion, comparisons.

The most important thing though is to find a general topic area and stick to it.

 

Here are my tips:
I point to "11 Tools to Help your Website", but its certainly not the only one in which the following applies to. The way you wrote that article is pretty awkward. You gave description and a small link what was subscribed. More importantly, the article wasn't scannable at all. The list should be:

1. Check Broken links
Xenu’s Link Sleuth is a free tool to help you check your site for broken links.
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Your readers don't have / nor will spend the time to reader each description to know what you are talking about. I wrote an article on making your site web surfer friendly.

Reading your about page, I didn't find that I could trust you after reading the part about your attempt at becoming a mail scammer. Scam is not something you ever want to associate with. You could play it off as, I've tried every trick in the book including ...., but don't say you've even tried to scam people. How do I know you're not scamming me?

 

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