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please checkout my essay site and leave your comments to let me know what you all think

 

Can't see it, it needs membership, do you provide any

The essay search input box, in that page I was just looking for an input box and I barely found it there after 20 secs, make it bright.

 

Yup you are right can check also!! I think it need membership

 

Looks interesting. Its a bit hard to navigate and the pages look like web 1.0.

 

why need membership?

 

http://www.foressay.net/NewMember/
new member section.

 

hmmm look nice

 

thank you vm

 

I like the theme and icons are used nicely.

 

The landing page just madfe me won't to click out of the site needs work sorry but good luck with the site

 

The color scheme is nice. You still need to work hard for the site. Best of Luck

 

the landing page is a little off-putting, i don't like clicking twice to get to the homepage. you should have it go to the homepage in the main language you are targeting your audience for, since the domain is in english, i would think it would be English.

when i click my english site, the logo goes away and instead it says world's largest paper site, and only by reading the page title in the top of the browser i see the purpose of the site -- and international homework helper site. ahh, this makes sense. you should make this purpose clear on the LANDING PAGE so people will understand WHY they have to select their language first.

it looks too simple overall. why only a search box? why not a list of categories, maybe include a monetized blog with homework tips/etc? its a good start but there is much to be done. and the layout is absolutely too plain.

since people must pay to enter this site you should include a list of why this site is better than all the other membership sites and exactly what you get. a link telling me to pay $30 isn't convincing me to pay up.

good luck!

 

disintegrationintochaos:
Yes, thank you for your attention, and i will add categories soon.

thanks.