Contest Flyer for pizza place - feedback for every entry! $40 Paypal prize - 48 hours ONLY!

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by PaulaSmiles, Aug 1, 2012.

  1. #1
    Great contest! Look at my feedback - the prize of $40 to the winner's Paypal WILL be awarded in 48 hours!

    A small pizza / deli restaurant wants to print a flyer with their address and menu on it.

    For now, we just need to see what the top of the flyer will look like. We will have the winner put the restaurant address / menu on later.

    If you want to put a placeholder address / menu, that will help - but is not required.

    Text: County Pizza & Deli

    Colors - black and white / grey-scale for printing

    Image: whatever you want to use - as long as you create it yourself or have the rights to the image

    Good luck, everyone!
     
    PaulaSmiles, Aug 1, 2012 IP
  2. hntdesign

    hntdesign Greenhorn

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    Untitled-1.png Untitled-2.png Feedback please!
     
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  3. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    hntdesign - thank you for your entry - I like the concept okay - this will be on a black and white flyer - could you show it in grayscale please?
     
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  4. friedbass

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    #4
    Entry by PM
     
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  5. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #5
    Thanks, friedbass!

    I love the entry... would you mind posting it here please with the couple changes I mentioned?
     
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  6. appleiinc

    appleiinc Active Member

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    #6
    wait for my entry :)
     
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  7. appleiinc

    appleiinc Active Member

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    #7
    [​IMG]
     
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  8. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #8
    Hi, appleinc!

    Thank you for providing a black and white version. I like that your design is simple with an easy to read font. If chosen it would go on top of a flyer that includes a menu.
     
    PaulaSmiles, Aug 1, 2012 IP
  9. hntdesign

    hntdesign Greenhorn

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    #9
    Untitled-3.png and gray...
     
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  11. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #11
    Rockafello, I really appreciate that your entry shows me the entire flyer and not just a logo. This is the type of entry I want. The restaurant is open to using either a one-sided or a two-sided flyer. I like that the restaurant name, phone number, address, and menu are all clear and easy to find. Thank you for your work on this.
     
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    Kvorum Greenhorn

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    #12
    my entries:

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    appleiinc Active Member

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  14. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #14
    Kvorum - Could you do the 2nd one with a plain white background... and make the restaurant name at the top smaller... and the pizza / text at the bottom smaller. If we had more space for the menu in the middle it might work.

    AppleInc - Thank you for updating your entry to show how it would look on the flyer!
     
    PaulaSmiles, Aug 2, 2012 IP
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    #15
    Could you elaborate a bit more on:

    Do they need a logo for this as well or do they have an existing one?

    Flyer dimensions:

    Can we use a different size than "letter" or can we do a custom size like that of a jumbo hanger or even 8x14?


    As well, if we had a rough layout of the menu items, we could better incorporate that area.

    Regards,
    friedbass.
     
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  16. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #16
    Hi again, friedbass!

    To be honest, the restaurant owners are very open to any ideas that you have.

    In fact, they said they really like your flyer. There only changes they requested were to take off "Free Delivery" and the credit card icons as they do not offer those options.

    They do not currently have a logo or website.

    They want a flyer where they can place their menu to hand out. It should also have their address / phone.

    I just received the actual menu from them. It is quite extensive so we may need to use the front and back of the flyer.

    Here is the entire menu:

    Sub Sandwiches

    Meats
    Roast Beef
    Turkey
    Meatball
    Ham

    Toppings
    Cheese
    Pepperjack
    American
    Provolone
    Lettuce
    Tomato
    Spinach
    Cucumber
    Bell Peppers
    Black Olives
    Onions
    Jalapenos
    Banana Peppers
    Pickles

    Salads
    Garden Salad
    Italian
    Grilled Chicken


    Pizza

    Pepperoni
    Sausage
    Hamburger
    Bell Peppers
    Black Olives
    Mushrooms
    Onions
    Single Topping Pizza
    Meat Lovers (Pepperoni, Sausage, Hamburger)
    Supreme Pizza (AKA the kitchen sink)

    Wings
    Honey BBQ
    Tequila Lime
    Wings of Fire

    Drinks
    Coke
    Diet Coke
    Dr Pepper
    Diet Dr Pepper
    Vitamin Water
    Poweraid

    PRICING

    Sub Sandwiches
    6 Inch Sub ONLY - $4.99
    6 Inch Sub MEAL - $6.75 (Includes Drink & Bag of Chips)
    12 Inch Sub ONLY - $7.50
    12 Inch Sub MEAL - $9.25 (Includes Drink & Bag of Chips)

    Salads
    Garden - $4.00
    Italian - $6.99
    Grilled Chicken - $6.99

    Pizzas
    Single Topping - $11.00
    Meatlovers - $15.00
    Supreme - $15.00

    Wings (7 of them) - $6.75 each
    Drinks
    All drinks are $1.75
     
    PaulaSmiles, Aug 2, 2012 IP
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    #17
    Thank you for the super fast reply "You rock!"

    I will make the requested revisions and, as well, see what else I can come up with.

    Regards,
    friedbass.
     
    friedbass, Aug 2, 2012 IP
  18. PaulaSmiles

    PaulaSmiles Well-Known Member

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    #18
    Thank you for all of the entries.

    The winner will be announced at 10 AM EST today.

    FriedBass, will you please place your entry into the thread?

    Thank you!
     
    PaulaSmiles, Aug 3, 2012 IP
  19. friedbass

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    #19
    [​IMG]

    friedbass.
     
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  20. PaulaSmiles

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    #20
    Congratulations to friedbass! What an amazing design! You are the winner of the $40 Paypal prize.

    Thank you to all others who took the time to enter as well.
     
    PaulaSmiles, Aug 3, 2012 IP