Contest Flash Animation URGENT

hey can you plzz let me know what all can i add to extnd the add coz i cant find much to add...

 

heres the prototype just tell me what all i have to add plzzzz

hereis the swf if you have the font problem

making the ad 1.5 min long is very difficult as we cant get enough resources or matter to put into it
if you could tell me smethin more abt it it would be great help....

 

so what happen to my file?

 

Well, I suppose that yours is too late and the CH has gone to the college

 

no.. i sent him immediately.. or maybe he bring it already to his school.. hehehe.. watch out for a negative comment CH

 

Hopefully.
BTW, I'm impressed that you can make it.
Can I see the preview

 

this one mate

http://www.johntomesa.0fees.net/

 

Is this the one which he said too short (just few seconds)?
The concept is good anyway.