first webpage would like opinions on layout. Please be honest

the website is bigredtanks.com. I feel like i could be losing viewers. This is a new site and my bounce rate is averaging 70%. I feel like i need to change things but i would just like honest opinions on what should be different. Don't be afraid to tear it apart. I just want honest input so i can improve it thanks in advance.

 

I would make the text for the phone number and e-mail in the header about 20% bigger. Also, I would fix this black header in place, and not let it disappear on scroll down, as phone number should always be in view.

I think you should put text content on the home page below the slider. You need to sell the company here. That means giving bullet points of why to choose you.

The text in the slider needs more thought, a better call to action, and slow it down a bit because it's too quick and annoying at the moment.

I hope that helps.

 

it definitely gives me a direction to head. I was thinking some content needed to be added to the homepage and really good advice about the header following the page so the contacts are always visible. Thank you very much for your input

 

Change color of slider text which is not redable in black you can use white color for better appearance.

 

Its nice.

 

thanks