First Impressions on my Robotics Blog

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Tralfamadorian, May 21, 2009.

  1. #1
    I have a robotics blog.
    My main interests are what your first impressions about the design are. Do you think "I want to leave." or "I want to stay and read / possibly bookmark or subscribe to the RSS feed."? What made you think this?

    As far as content goes: Do you like my writing style? If you do, what aspects do you like. If you don't, what should I change to make you happy as my reader?

    Thank you very much for taking time to review my website. If you leave a quality/constructive post (positive or negative) about my site I will be happy to similarly review your website. PM me the URL.
     
    Tralfamadorian, May 21, 2009 IP
  2. NodeGeek

    NodeGeek Banned

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    #2
    I think its a little plain at the moment. Maybe also try use a circuit background. Will give it a moe technical feel.
     
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  3. Tralfamadorian

    Tralfamadorian Peon

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    #3
    I'm confused about what you mean because there is already a circuit background. Do you mean over the whole thing?
     
    Tralfamadorian, May 21, 2009 IP
  4. studioworks22

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    #4
    your site design is to plain .. don't have robotic feeling :p
    thanks ..
     
    studioworks22, May 21, 2009 IP
  5. kennyk3

    kennyk3 Well-Known Member

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    #5
    Maybe adding a more "robotic" design at the top, like a header image instead of just a title link.

    I don't think it's that bad of a design, but a catchy logo might help keep people interested and know more about what the sites about.
     
    kennyk3, May 21, 2009 IP
  6. TheCrax

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    #6
    1. suggest to use a .com better
    2. design is too simple try to add new template
    3. articles is few try to add more useful articles
    4. site with low traffic, you need seo/exchange links with your friends
     
    TheCrax, May 22, 2009 IP
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    aneslin85 Banned

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    #7
    You need to put a good theme,
    btw, I like ur contents,
    and following ur feed :)
     
    aneslin85, May 22, 2009 IP
  8. SamCombs

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    #8
    A lot of people that review websites on these forums are always commenting on how a site looks. I know that is the kind of feedback most people want of their websites but site design is not as important as most people believe. I think your site looks fine and navigates easily. My impressions on if I wanted to stay and read was not based on the design and look but on the content. Which in this case I did read a few articles because I'm interested in science and technology.

    Your writing style on the other hand, there's something about it that I didn't like. It almost feels like I'm reading a text book, and I don't think to many people enjoy reading text books. Also you use the word "stuck" three times in the very first paragraph, it makes you seem amateurish. You should use a synonym if you're going to be repeating a common verb like that. There are plenty of resources out there that can help you out. I would suggest practicing some more to make your writing style more mellifluous. (See what I did thar, I used a big word :)
     
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  9. Tralfamadorian

    Tralfamadorian Peon

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    #9
    I'm glad you like it! Thanks for following.
    I really like the template, but I do think you are right about the simple design. I am thinking about putting a logo up top, like the two reviewers below say.
    The logo that you can currently see in as the Favicon, could be put at the top. How would that look?
    I try to mix up my articles between short comments on videos, technical things, and news pieces. I wrote that one at 5am, should have proof read it.
     
    Tralfamadorian, May 22, 2009 IP
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    bjwica Active Member

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    Honestly, I love the simplicity of it. In my opinion I would not change a thing. Love it.

    Cheers
     
    bjwica, May 22, 2009 IP
  11. Tralfamadorian

    Tralfamadorian Peon

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    Do you think one post per day is too few? I try to do two a day, but sometimes it is only one.
     
    Tralfamadorian, May 23, 2009 IP
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    #12
    I like your style and overall layout. It is neat and compact. I don't think you need to change it at all. But I found all your outbound links are placed on the bottom. I was wondering if it was something wrong with my IE or some others? Just my 2 cents.
     
    qingtim99, May 23, 2009 IP
  13. Tralfamadorian

    Tralfamadorian Peon

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    Do you mean the whole right sidebar or just links within posts? What version of IE are you using?

    Thanks.
     
    Tralfamadorian, May 23, 2009 IP
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    #14
    exactly i felt like that
     
    fouroozesh, May 23, 2009 IP
  15. 2advance

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    #15
    Nice blog, interesting to read it. Just make the content into justify style, looks better..
     
    2advance, May 23, 2009 IP