First Design

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by daniegb123, Nov 2, 2007.

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    Hello, this is my first ever template design...

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    Could anyone give feedback, it is my 1st so try not to be to harsh I know its not great but at least I tried :)

    Daniel
     
    daniegb123, Nov 2, 2007 IP
  2. Kerosene

    Kerosene Alpha & Omega™ Staff

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    Personally I'd get rid of that awful heading font, and justify or left-align the text. Also, consider the fact that it will look totally different once it's coded and using web fonts.
    Since it's your first try, I'll leave it there :p

    Melbourne in da house! :D
     
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  3. daniegb123

    daniegb123 Banned

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    well it was really just a turn at trying something different, I do design logos but I just wanted to try and see what I could make out of a template. The layout is all I am really wanting feedback in the header was just a quick thing done. Thanks for the feedback though :). Anything else that can be changed at all, I am willing to go over it till it looks good :).
     
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    If its your first ever template your off to a good start There is no excellence without difficulty.
     
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    The footer gradient doesn't look consistent.. is it suppose to look blotchy? It might look better if it was all flowing smoothly..
     
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    personaly, i wouldnt take it at all, i'm not liking the pinkish color that much, and i don't think it look that good with the black and white writing.
     
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