First design attempt in years

Discussion in 'Design' started by Craig McCall, Jul 17, 2013.

  1. #1
    Ok so last time i did any web design i was about 14, thought i would give it another go! This only took me about an hour or 2 so go easy! Just looking for some feedback.

    http://craigmccall43.deviantart.com/art/CM-First-Draft-Web-Design-Marketing-386040372

    Logo i did this morning for a cloud based consultancy firm (Concept)

    http://craigmccall43.deviantart.com/art/Spotlight-386052062
     
    Craig McCall, Jul 17, 2013 IP
  2. Vernard

    Vernard Member

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    On the first design, the header is a bit blank in my view. Maybe add text on the right side of the header?
    As for the logo. It's brilliant!
     
    Vernard, Jul 17, 2013 IP
  3. Craig McCall

    Craig McCall Greenhorn

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    Thanks, been really struggling with filling it, even tried that logo in the site out of interested but looked daft.
     
    Craig McCall, Jul 17, 2013 IP
  4. Vernard

    Vernard Member

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    Hmmm. Maybe try adding a black transparent box with text like "Latest updates/blog posts". Not quite sure, just an idea.
     
    Vernard, Jul 17, 2013 IP
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    #5
    I believe the issue is not so much the design but it is the hard colors you are using. Try to go for cooler colors like :
    • #77BFEC
    • #5082A1
    • #EDCC77
    • #A17D50
    These are all nice and soft colors.
     
    ZoeF, Jul 17, 2013 IP
  6. Katy

    Katy Moderator Staff

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    I would blend the blue color of the header with a nice pattern if you don't plan to put anything else in there. It would still be simple (like you want it), but with a nice touch. :) Otherwise I like your design!
     
    Katy, Jul 19, 2013 IP
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    qwikad.com Illustrious Member Affiliate Manager

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    That Spotlight thing is awesome. And I liked the template too. I mean, if you didn't do this in years and then came up with something this awesome, I think you've got a real talent.
     
    qwikad.com, Jul 19, 2013 IP