First article

I just write my first serious and major article..

If you want to check it out click below.

RYANNNNN//written by a 13 year old


Or you can just click my latest blog post near my username.

 

not to bad .....looks like your doing well keep it up

 

yes, I think not bad

 

Thanks, hopefully someone will comment with their result .. although I doubt it.

 

Mmm... I haven't read all of it, but your very first word is spelled wrong. "Your" should be "You're." Briefly glancing over the article, I've noticed several grammatical mistakes. I don't mean to sound harsh -- I must give you props for trying -- but the article needs some work.

 

OK - I'll try too improve the grammar on my next blog post.

 

Keep up the good work!

 

yes, pretty good article

 

Mistakes abound, BUT it's good for a 13-year-old. Your first focus, at this point in life, should be on interest factor and flow. Once you get that down, clean it up.

Nice breakdown on the article.

 

I liked it, but the same as what marketjunction said... mistakes, but overall good for your age. Keep doing what your doing