finally fully done...review please thanks!

Finally done my site

can you guys please review it and tell me how everything is and if you come across any errors let me know

Site to review

just one thing left to do on the site is add some videos

also just if anyone knows how i can get traffic to the site now and how can i make the site forums active?

thanks!

 

Hi,

It looks like you have put some work into it and did a good job.

Now, since you did ask for a review, I'm going to take that to mean that even though it's good, how can you improve it even more as well as getting your forum poppin'.

Okay, first off, we know that 75% of the actions taken on any site are primarily based on how effective the headline was.

So, with test results that say video is converting higher than any other medium, I think your idea of video is great for the salespage.

I believe it should be upbeat and maybe even kind of "hard-hitting" to get the visitors engaged and interacting with the site on a level that involves their senses.

With that in mind, the webform or login form looks a little drab.

And since the headlines are what get people to "take action" and

people "taking action" is what gets site owners the money to make more

headlines (lol), I professionally recommend that you have a graphic

just above the webform with a large red arrow that points down to the
form and the words in text or graphic, "Sign Up for FREE to Play!"

Something like that.

Also, to make it exponentially more effective, in your video,

there needs to be a visual arrow pointing to the webform with the same
red arrow as well as the voice over saying,

"Just Sign Up at the Form to Your Right to Get Started Playing for FREE Right Now!"

There's an old addage that says, if you don't tell people what you want them to do, then they won't know what it is they're supposed to do.

So SEIZE their attention with the engaging video both with sound and sight

(audio and video) ALL working together as a system to achieve the common sole purpose and goal

of getting that account created.

I hope you have found this review helpful and constructive and are willing

to take it to the bank because it's the kind of advice that will take you there!

Doug

of your site

 

hi thanks alot for the review, you had some very nice points there! will work on geting them done

 

Hey no problem. I like seeing people moving ahead with their businesses and goals.

Hope it helps, of course, please remember to test everything by tracking and always working toward improving your conversion rate higher.

Doug

PS. MInd reviewing my product?

 

-Kill news section- people looking for time to blow could care less about news imo
-Get a favicon (branding improves value)
-More games on front page!
-Can't find games easily

 

Hi there I like the site and I like the games

two quick points

1) I am not a fan of the white background

2) Do the google ads not point people away to your competitors

all the best

G

 

Nice, simple design... Try to experiment with other colors though.

 

The lay out is fine and simple. You could make more attractive header image

 

Looks good in my books.. nice layout and colors.. good job.

 

thanks alot for these reviews i will surley look into all of them....more reviews would be appericiated

thanks!

 

looks good to me.. the domain name is not bad. i was getting "pop up"s though. good luck!

 

thanks snowball1

 

Looks really nice, to only thing to complain about is the popup

 

thanks b_andersson will take care of that soon

and an update: i have now added a favicon