I am testing one writer. He have written this news : http://blog.onlinexcasinos.com/2008/09/02/man-shot-outside-river-cree-casino-has-been-identified/ what do you think ? is it written well ? please you can give me one feedback.
There are lots of grammatical errors in it. I wouldn't say it was written well, no. I've seen a lot worse, but it certainly doesn't read like a professional news article.
thanks your feedback. can you report almost one/two grammatical errors ? do you do one service of proofreading and editing ?