Feedback wanted on my latest Ad

I wanted to get some feed back on my latest adwords Ad do you think you would click on this?

Banks hate this ad
10 things they don't want you to
ever learn about Credit Cards!
crazygreenbacks.com

Thanks

 

Banks Hate This Website

how you think

 

Hmmm, it doesn't roll off the tongue very easily. You've tried to use shock factor by saying "banks hate this ad", but as infosmith has pointed out - that could actually hurt your CTR, as banks are generally seen as officials. So if the banks hate the ad then some people might think "oh, I better not click it then".

I was actually going to give you some advice on how to modify your advert, but I've just taken a look at your website and it looks awful. You need to clean it up a great deal before you start investing money advertising it. I would also suggest you write better content.

It seems your strategy here is to buy visitors from adwords and get them to click on your adsense adverts. Let me tell you, this is NOT going to work. Your website is horrible and people will leave after a few seconds, they won't be clicking your ads. Don't waste your money. Put your back into it and create something excellent, something you can be proud of, only then will you see any return on your investment.

 

Banks hate this ad
10 things they don't want you to
ever learn about Credit Cards!
crazygreenbacks.com

how about:

Credit Card Warning
Free Report Reveals 10 Things
They Don't Want You To Know
crazygreenbacks.com

 

PPC-Coaches text ad is a lot more clickable

 

I agree your ad idea is a lot better and the site isn't up yet that's how i bought it off here. Thanks again