I'm operating a small business start-up, and I'd love some feedback on the site. Anything and everything. The link to the site is: s211904495.onlinehome.us Thanks very much!
looks like every other ebook or listing selling page. i would change the design to look less like a long ad.
Hmm okay... I'm not much of a web designer; could you be more specific? Good advice, thank you... I can definitely see what you mean.
That's nice to hear, thank you muchly! The actual site has a proper domain name; I just figured it might be better to use an alternate domain here.
Nice site! The actual design is pretty good. I love the graphics and colors you've used. The only thing I'd recommend you do is change the font to something "cleaner", such as the default one used here on DP. I personally find the current font a little hard to read. All the best, Liam
Hello. Site looks good. Would recommend using the entire area for your header. Seems like a tough market to me. Good Luck. Respectfully, Lhlalyam
I think what's important is that the essential info shows right away. It inevitable that if there's alot you'll have to scroll down however if I were you, I'd try to condense the info (perhaps use smaller fonts too?). good luck!
hey first of all domain name, you'll never gain regular buyers on it, only in care they will put you in a bookmarks, change it quickly and put a mirror from this domain to the new one, check domains in this forum as well. it's rather cheap and comfortable to use
You have a good eye for design but what is the primary goal for this page? goal - not goals! make the page easier to read by aligning the offers sequencially down the page vertically don't cram the info in there this has been proven many times to slow conversion create a clear series of action that way you can track it too right now you are trying to put the introduction to your service right next to the offer right next to how you can help this lowers customer trust just like it would in real life ( you would't say all of that in one sentance) test the vertical presentation and think about what you would do in real life with a real person what would you way first, how would you ease their fears, build desire etc good luck and sounds like a great product the biggest thing to remember is that people need ONE clear action at a time if they have too many they simply don't act good luck J
The design lookgs godd but the structure seems kinda messy to me with all the boxes in different sizes. I would consider organizing it a little bit more.
I don't like design...two columns...little hard to read it's confuses me ...and makes me want to hit back button