Hi everybody, just wanted to get feedback on my landing page. We have a high bounce rate and users don't spend much time on our site. We have been focusing all of our attention on car forums. Our banner ads on those forums point to this page: http://www.gotogroupbuy.com/landingpages/iwsti.aspx?keywords=subaru%20sti%20wrx%20impreza Feedback will be greatly appreciated.
I just had a look here landing page, and I'm not the biggest fan... I'm not saying this to sound harsh, but it could use a lot of work. It reminds me of many unsuccessful squeeze pages I've seen before. I'm not going to go into all the nitty-gritty details, but here's one tip I will offer. "Offer your audience enough information so they know what they're supposed to do." By the looks of your page, and I may be wrong, you want your visitor to click through and participate in a group of a car product. Why not, in the first paragraph, give step-by-step instructions of how this whole process works. Now, your returning visitors may already be familiar with the process, but it really helps your new visitors. If you went to a little more detail, PM me and we can talk on Instant Messenger.
were the car image and big text is now you can add some cars with nice reflections and also make a nice text on the image using Photoshop. the logo starts in green and ends in grey and also has big square borders around it. also i don't like the border around the main area as well...it doesn't match with the background color which is almost the same...
I completely agree with mihealaanca. And I want to add here about the images of the car. They seem to be very dull and not at all attractive. The brightness of these images could be increased. Just my views
Here's a redesign of the landing page I did BEFORE posting to the thread... I did not think of posting it before. All comments welcome.