Feedback on landing page

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by MammaRose, Aug 27, 2007.

  1. #1
    I am looking for some feedback on my landing page www.targettattoo.com

    Please give me the good and bad. I have tried using the PPC way, and I am instead changing to use organic traffic from search engines.

    thank you
     
    MammaRose, Aug 27, 2007 IP
  2. shlomof

    shlomof Peon

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    #2
    I'd put a larger text for some of the text...
    like this one: "Now you do not have to go through stacks and stacks of
    binders at your local tattoo shop to find
    the tattoo that you always wanted.
     
    shlomof, Aug 27, 2007 IP
  3. chaos4u

    chaos4u Peon

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    #3
    Use redirects for you affiliate links so mouseover will display on the bottom of the screen:
    http://www.targettattoo.com/chopper-tattoo.php:)

    Not:
    http://blrose.choppertat.hop.clickbank.net:(

    Also, for your screen shots, use alt tags and hidden affiliate links.
    You want to give the impression that you are providing free information.

    John Chow's Blog shows have to create a redirect:
    http://www.johnchow.com/how-to-hide-affiliate-links/
    http://www.johnchow.com/hiding-affiliate-links-for-better-seo/

    Hope this helps some.
     
    chaos4u, Aug 28, 2007 IP
  4. downloadsonline.org

    downloadsonline.org Active Member

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    #4
    looks good
    do not underline text that is not a link. It can confuse your visitors.
    All the Best
     
    downloadsonline.org, Aug 28, 2007 IP
  5. MammaRose

    MammaRose Banned

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    thanks everyone for the suggestions.
     
    MammaRose, Aug 28, 2007 IP