Feedback on first site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Ryan Hamer, Apr 5, 2006.

  1. #1
    Hi DP,

    I am working on a landing page to promote an ebook that I hope to finish shortly. I decided to go the 5 day seminar route and build trust and my list at the same time. I figure since my niche is unique I can go so many different ways after I get my first ebook out there and I can create other books based on the the topics covered in my first ebook ala the for dummies franchise. Anyhow I don't have a script for the email capture and was wondering what you guys think about either paying a company a monthly fee for that or getting a free script and running it myself. I was wondering if you all would mind taking a look at my page and then getting back to me with feedback both positive and negative. I know the picture looks crummy...that will change or maybe I will do away with the picture entirely. I know I don't have anything set up to capture emails yet maybe some of you could give me some ideas on whether the copy is okay and how I could or what I should use to grab emails. I haven't started promoting it at all as it is still very rough for me. Thanks a lot and I look forward to the feedback. The site is certianbuy.com
    You can email me at Ryan at certainbuy dot com

    Thanks in advance.

    Ryan

    P.S. Sorry if this was put in the wrong section....I am sure someone will tell me so if I have.
     
    Ryan Hamer, Apr 5, 2006 IP
  2. C-E-O

    C-E-O Active Member

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    Not bad, great the use of space....the only thing that got to me was the little "Learn more" button that scrolls from right to left........Take away the moving effect and center the button and you will be on a roll!:)
     
    C-E-O, Sep 5, 2007 IP
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    courtfool Peon

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    Just needs to be tightened up a little.
    A good way to get traffic to the site would be to get some abnners up on some other sites. There is no such thing as too much traffic to a site. Let me know if I can help. PM me
     
    courtfool, Sep 5, 2007 IP