Feedback on Business Card templates

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by jashsayani, May 23, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    I am not such a great designer but am an Intermediate designer. I have made some Business card templates and would love to get feedback.

    1. GLOBAL BUSINESS CARD

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    2. FIRE BUSINESS CARD

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    3. CLASSIC BUSINESS CARD

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    jashsayani, May 23, 2009 IP
  2. WeedGrinch

    WeedGrinch Active Member

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    I think the 3rd one looks the nicest. I would create more like that one.
     
    WeedGrinch, May 23, 2009 IP
  3. elitepostings

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    #3
    Yes, the third one. Go for simple elegance and also somewhat liberal elegance like your third one.
     
    elitepostings, May 24, 2009 IP
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    #4
    Def the third one...its clean and elegant
     
    jryan54, May 24, 2009 IP
  5. Destinyx3

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    #5
    The third one is the most appealing in my opinion. Remove the outer glow on the flames and text of the second one and it will help out. The first one is very good too, but very generic.
     
    Destinyx3, May 24, 2009 IP
  6. jashsayani

    jashsayani Active Member

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    Thanks everyone.

    So everyone likes the 3rd one :)
     
    jashsayani, May 25, 2009 IP
  7. GA1988

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    #7
    Third design is simple, elegant and very customer-attractive. Designs 1 and 2 are too stylish.
     
    GA1988, May 25, 2009 IP
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    #8
    Your 3rd one is obviously the best, but your first 2 aren't bad either - I think you just need to change the fonts of 'business name' and 'tag line'
     
    twizzlers, May 26, 2009 IP
  9. A Yellow Fellow

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    #9
    They all look really nice, but some reason the second one looks like it would be for a pumpkin patch.
     
    A Yellow Fellow, May 27, 2009 IP
  10. mrdon

    mrdon Active Member

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    Third for sure
     
    mrdon, May 29, 2009 IP
  11. Ribbon

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    #11
    The third one is a good looking design.
     
    Ribbon, May 29, 2009 IP
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    TmGraphics Banned

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    #12
    I think the first two are abit in your face but i like the third: more professional
    Tom
     
    TmGraphics, May 29, 2009 IP
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    #13
    Third one looks clean and professional...
     
    sabhariprasad, May 31, 2009 IP
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    #14
    Sweet, I love the first one,

    Can I have the PSD to get it printed? or are these not up for grabs :p
     
    Lzee3, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  15. jashsayani

    jashsayani Active Member

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    Wow! Thanks a lot for the feedback guys... :)
     
    jashsayani, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  16. nj2k2k1

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    #16
    would have to agree with everyone that the 3rd is the best...first two could still be good, just need to be tweaked a bit
     
    nj2k2k1, Jun 1, 2009 IP