Feedback needed on Weight Loss Website.

Discussion in 'Websites' started by geoffco23, Jul 15, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hi.

    I'd be grateful if you could take a look at my site -

    http://goodshape.biz

    - and offer some constructive suggestions regarding look, content, sales and squeeze pages, etc. I've been working on this for some months, tweaking SEO and appearance, and I'm slowly getting more traffic (mostly through articles and videos).

    Squeeze pages - converting. Sales page - not. Any copywriting experts out there with advice to spare, don't hold back.

    Thanks in advance,

    GW.

    http://bit.ly/d7PhMj
     
    geoffco23, Jul 15, 2010 IP
  2. LittleWing

    LittleWing Greenhorn

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    #2
    It looks good.
     
    LittleWing, Jul 16, 2010 IP
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    xtrecoolx Greenhorn

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    Your header image text, which is "Get in good shape" looks a little bit vague/too bright. Also you position bmi calculator to the center, since you position everything else like that.
     
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    I would agree with the header comment.....it needs to have more impact.
     
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    i like the domain name
     
    motorid, Jul 17, 2010 IP
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    #6
    are u trying to sell the actual book on the internet? a buy it now shopping cart is needed
     
    on9homestore, Jul 19, 2010 IP
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    Site is looking godo and professional i think you should select better header for your site
     
    lucyadwords, Jul 19, 2010 IP
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    I think you should use a different font for the logo, it should also be more prominent. The line spacing on your headlines needs to be increased. Personally not too keen on the buttons and right hand title bars.
     
    pixelqueen, Jul 20, 2010 IP
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    I like the design and layout
     
    garychen, Jul 20, 2010 IP
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    I don't like the color scheme. It looks a little fresh but at all the colors are not combined well.
     
    InvestorMind, Jul 21, 2010 IP