Hi. I'd be grateful if you could take a look at my site - http://goodshape.biz - and offer some constructive suggestions regarding look, content, sales and squeeze pages, etc. I've been working on this for some months, tweaking SEO and appearance, and I'm slowly getting more traffic (mostly through articles and videos). Squeeze pages - converting. Sales page - not. Any copywriting experts out there with advice to spare, don't hold back. Thanks in advance, GW. http://bit.ly/d7PhMj
Your header image text, which is "Get in good shape" looks a little bit vague/too bright. Also you position bmi calculator to the center, since you position everything else like that.
I think you should use a different font for the logo, it should also be more prominent. The line spacing on your headlines needs to be increased. Personally not too keen on the buttons and right hand title bars.