Hey Guys, I'm producing a documentary about entrepreneurship and small business. We were lucky enough to interview Andrew Warner from Mixergy, John Lee Dumas from EO Fire, and Pat Flynn to name a few. We're currently editing and putting everything together. I'm tweaking the landing page and would love to get your thoughts: http://shohawk.com/generation-freedom Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Cheers,
Looks good. I like what you wrote. I would be open to being [slightly] more positive, from other critics, 'cause you talk about your luggage. Maybe you can sprinkle in some positive things about career life. E.g., I am driven to succeed, but I have blinders on in regards to the importance of a social life. I like the mobile responsive design! Your javascript writeup is aslo a plus.