Feedback and Criticism wanted on a student-made video!

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by ChaoStryder, Aug 25, 2011.

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    Hey Everyone,


    I'm a second year marketing student competing in a competition. One of our challenges was to make a video/advertisement in a very very limited amount of time. Being a marketing major myself, i'm extremely curious what you think of the following video from a marketing perspective and also any feedback you would be able to provide. Please keep in mind, this was made in a very very short time frame. Thanks!


    Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dg52ywTeBek

    Thanks!
     
    ChaoStryder, Aug 25, 2011 IP
  2. boldpunter

    boldpunter Peon

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    The sound quality is a bit patchy and the acting a little contrived / amateurish in places but ,that aside, I thought it was very good. It captures the essence of the product well and projects the right sort of image to the target audience. It's also humorous in an ironic / self parodying sort of way and I think that gets the audience onside and makes them more likely to assume that the product is a good one.
     
    boldpunter, Aug 25, 2011 IP
  3. RayWhittaker

    RayWhittaker Greenhorn

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    I couldn't understand what the product was supposed to be. Is this selling mobile phones or car rental? ... or then again, something else?
     
    RayWhittaker, Aug 25, 2011 IP