Feed back on my first logo for wifes photography site

Hey all just wondering if you could give some feed back on my logo design for my wife's photography site that is going to be up and running soon.

 

The logo design is beautiful, I love the colors on the black background, the only thing I found distracting is the reflection of the word Photography. Otherwise the design is very creative!

 

i love the colors as well, the reflection is kinda wierd. It could be a TAD brighter just to stand out some more. Otherwise its pretty nice dude.

 

Here are a few suggestions (just some tweaks that'll make the logo nicer)

- Move the oval (with the landscape image inside of it) to the left a bit... right now, it's too close to the "y"
- The reflection for photography is too pronounced, I would make it more faded into the black.. change the opacity to 50% instead?

 

The choice of colors look good on black background.

Things that need to be polished;

Remove Bevel/Emboss from "Flutter By Me" or try some different variations.

Also try something different for that clipping mask at the centre of your logo.

You want to resemble that logo to an eye...and eye for photography right ! The concept is clear and bold but it didn't come out as expected.

 

Cool

Thanks for the feed back so all in all on a scale one to ten how would you rate my first logo?

 

I will give you 6.5...the points were lost due to the reflection of the photography that Maggie2009 pointed out earlier. It's kinda distracting. Make logos/nanners with lighter colors and try different color combination! Welcome to the forums BTW!

 

That logo looks very adultish, something id expect from a adult photographer.

I think you should use lighter colours like alistair said.

 

i didn't find ur second logo...well nevermind

I would rate your first logo 3 on a scale of 1-5

Post ur new edited logo...