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Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by gun16, Feb 21, 2008.

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    Hi guys,

    I'm the developer on the 32edge.com team, and I have built the techincal side of the product called the Triple Double Edge www.32edge.com We believe the product is the best out there, offering much more than just a jumpm program.

    We also think the price is also very competitive.

    But we think the landing page must downright suck, because we are getting great traffic but very low conversion rates. We are currently split testing.

    I've been trawling through this and other forums to try and get as much information as possible.

    I know you guys are in the know and can definatley point us in the right direction with what we are doing wrong.

    So if anyone could provide expert advice, feedback, criticisms we would love to hear it.

    Thanks

    Gun16
     
    gun16, Feb 21, 2008 IP
  2. gun16

    gun16 Peon

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    Anyone, we could really do with your help!
     
    gun16, Feb 26, 2008 IP
  3. mohamedd

    mohamedd Active Member

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    now i am vertical jump enthusiast but i find that in this niche its all about the previous results your customers got and how long it took them etc. All in all you dont need to really convince them too get the product you need to show past success like this http://www.dunknow.com look at thier testimonials. In this niche being a comsumer my self its all about the success your past customers.

    Also i think your writing is too clumped together it just does not look fun too read. and the color is not the greatest one ever either

    also i have seen this a million times on other products like yours also " Are you looking to double your vertical?
    We are talking about a serious 8-14 inches+.
    Be the strongest, fastest, most agile player on your squad!"

    be creative.
    you could use.

    "other ballers are schooling you because they used this course to gain crazy inches on thier vertical to leave you in eating thier dust"

    Not the greatest i know, but i think you get the point.

    Another thing is that this niche also has a lot of teens who are just looking for freebies, well I was one any ways :)

    Good luck. If you want a nice site builder pm me.
     
    mohamedd, Feb 26, 2008 IP