would someone be willing to look at my student loan site and show me how to rewrite it for better keyword placement. or show me your site with good keyword density so I can see how it would read.
Just a couple of things I would do because I think your density needs to be a bit higher. I'll use this page as an example. Basically, you need to get your keyword in there as many times as possible but without sounding spammy. IMO, there are much bigger problems with your site, however, from an SEO standpoint. Here are the two biggies: 1. Joomla has an option to turn on search engine friendly URLs, you need to do that because yours are really ugly (no offense). 2. On the example page I used above, I assumed your primary keyword was "paying for college". If that's the case, your title should read "Paying for College - Student loan Relief to assist in paying for college" or something like that. Some people may disagree that it could or should be used twice in the title tag but I think everyone would agree that it definitely needs to be FIRST in the title tag and your title should be a bit longer.
After you choose your Keywords it’s always a good idea to use them for your titles, headings, etc. If the keywords are “student loan†use that as the titles don’t do this “My good student loans†or “Fantastic Student Loansâ€. I know many people will tell you to cram your text with keywords but I would rather advise you to put them in bold or italic. It’s a good idea also to add your keywords to the footer “2006 copywrite Student Loans†Remember that onpage optimisation is not as important as offpage optimisation.