I'm attempting to create my own logo for my etsy shop, HoneyCheri (which is currently named itspaperperfecthoney... see why it needed a rename?). I am by no means a graphic designer and I really need something that looks good. I was wanting pastel, but simple. I have to have this logo soon since I'm going to be attending a convention in about a month. Any suggestions? Thanks!!! (And now that I'm posting them, the colors don't look anything like they did on Illustrator...)
I honestly like your etsy shop logo the way it is: https://www.etsy.com/shop/itspaperperfecthoney It's nice and clean. Maybe in your eyes it's not quite representing your current products, but I think it should work quite nicely long term (your products may and will change over time). If you want to keep the original colors, save your images in .png, because .jpg tend to change colors after saving.
the first one seems better. check the export settings, or maybe the settings of the artwork, it might be set to CMYK mode. That could be the reason of the changed colors.